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MLP Oc Velvet Thorn: CRITIQUE WANTED

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Introducing my new My Little Pony OC Velvet Thorn

I tried to make the name hint at what she did but still not entirely giving it away.

Well lets start with that Bio shall we?

Age: Young adult

Where abouts: She is a fancy Canterlot Pony

Job: She owns her own rather fancy flower shop that's in the middle of the town, and she has all of her flowers grown either upstairs in the shop where she lives or at her parents small field who live off not to far else where.

What her cutie mark represents: As you can tell is a bouquet of flowers, and a fancy one too. She got her cutie mark when she was younger and was picking flowers for her mom and her roommates when she was in the hospital (nothing serious though) and she loved seeing how happy everyone was with all there personalized flower bouquet's 

Status: Well, she's a single pony who is never ready to mingle... or mingle in a way to where she dates someone anyways. She's not the richest of ponies but likes to dress up so though she may not be as well dressed as the other unicorns at Canterlot. She does love to dress  her self up in fake pearls and flowers though which does always look nice and turn a few heads. Cause well.. it IS different. I only saw this like 2 times in the show I think.

Other info: HA YOU THOUGHT FLUTTERSHY WAS THE ONE WITH MANE EXTENSIONS, Well she still is the one with them haha, Velvet here has never cut her hair and doesn't plan on it. She loves long hair though hers gets in the way when she walks sometimes, she often has to kick it behind her when she turns and she has to wash it often because of how it drags. Oh and her horn color magic is pink btw

Personality: She's sweet though she is rather picky, she also doesn't take negative thoughts well. If some pony walks in, insults her flowers and leaves she'll yell at them for their lack of taste or something. But outside of the fancy city she's really carefree and would roll around outside with her family for quite a while and enjoy her self.

This is all I have for now, and this is NOT her final design this OC is still a work in progress. But I would still love your thoughts on her thus far
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Oh man she is just sooo beatiful i love her hair and tail it's just soooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo P - R - E - T - T -Y ALSO her cutiemark is devine but i think her body should be white and her hair is redd reddd cause it looks more matching than red her body and white her hair cause it looks like she is old no offence!!!! but other than that everything is beautiful especially her necklace so pretty

here is a rose for you and a cake for a good job well done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt=":rose:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="314" title="Rose"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="32" height="32" alt=":cake:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="119" title="Have your cake and eat it too"/>

~Tori/Clara
love it