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well i read mais's critique and had almost pretty much everything but one so lemme give you a tip
you should start practicing anatomy more, especially arms and legs and
DUN DUN DUN
hands.
see, i know cartoony style is less realistic but it makes you seem more professional when not all the poses are of their hands behind their back. it's cute, but people only do it because they aren't too good with hands. if you want to just start practicing with paper and pencil on arms and legs, it help tremendously :>
don't forget to observe people and how body parts look when they walk, sit or so on. DON'T FORGET ZE HANDS THO OK
it's taken me forever but i think im finally decent with them.
i hope this helps you <33
PS don't be afraid to look at tutorials cos they help me a ton c:
For instance, I think you're in a point in drawing/coloring where you could be incorporating ruffles in clothes. It makes it seem better/more realistic, but it can be frustrating when trying to do them/learn them =3=
Next, I noticed how good most of the picture looked, but then the shoes. I think it's time to also learn how to draw well.. better shoes? Not just those cartoon-y lumps, that are supposed to be shoes. Add some more details, like socks, laces, and so on.
Another thing is, although I think in this picture it looks nice, from now on I would try drawing eyebrows more often, and not using this style of eyes again, unless you shade them or something of the sort.
Also, when you shade, from now on maybe it would be a better idea not to just shade with a darker color, and spread out, you know? Use the marker tool, and try not using the blur tool anymore. If you have to blur, use the water color tool(s), because it gives it a better transition in color. Or, better yet, just shading with the pen tool and leaving as is, and only shading a few parts here and there, because that looks better than shading the whole thing.
I think the rest of the drawing is really good, but maybe you should start doing actual backgrounds; which I know most people hate, but sometimes you just have to expand the comfort zone, you know?
Okay my darling I love you and I hope this helped<3
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