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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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i like the way you highlighted her hair, but the spikes on the ponytail don't really belong, cos her hair is bushy and curly, but spikes go more for straight hair.
OK I LOVE HOW YOU ADDED PLUMPNESS AND SHAPE TO THE LEGS, IT'S ADORABLE, but with the arms, try to just measure with your fingers how long each arm is, so they're the same length.
right now, if you unbent her right arm, it would be a little longer than the other. and just because the view of the girl, (she's not facing us, she's facing someone to the right of us) if anything that arm should be shorter than the other. also, keep in mind that you should round out the fingers, so they're not as spiky. now if you're going to have her have 3 fingers and a thumb, make the thumb more prominent, becas right now it just looks like she has four webbed fingers.
the other arm however, should be that straight, becas no one has their arm as straight as a board when waving to someone.
try to bend it a little, so it looks more natural.
other thank that,
I THINK IT'S SUPER ADORABLE <33
Alright, so at first from a glance I thought the background was part of her hair o u o heh I'm blind ;~;
So alright, first thing I look at is the flower since it's at the top. It looks sorta odd, and I don't know if you were trying to do a 3D look, but I'm not sure so I won't say much about it ;w;
Her hair is alright, I like the curly part of it the most. The shading on it is somewhat messy, as in the lines should be smoother and maybe blured/watercolored a tiny bit, not to destroy the shapes of the shading but just so the shading doesn't look messy.
The shading on her face/skin is rather odd. For one, you shaded with a black airbrush I believe, which doesn't really look good. It's better to use skin colors (Here's my personal pallet
I like her dress, although those effects on the blue just look like they don't belong ;-; but I do like the color combos ;D
The shoes are sorta just eh. They don't really have a foot shape, and are extremely small. I know it's cartoonish, but I would think they would be a bit bigger ;w;
okey my darling there you go ;D
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