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Contest entry: Human Frostbite by Syico Contest entry: Human Frostbite by Syico
Well if you couldn't tell I kinda though she would be an Asian/Caucasian Mix. Not exactly in modern day but not exactly ancient (like neanderthals) (e-e don't ask me for a era date please ;n; ) Soo I tried to make her look has naturally human has possible but also including her Frostbite color schemes (believe it or not I got her skin tone form her already placed colors lol)
I was thinking if she needed a separate human name (if frostbite wasn't going to also be used has her human name) It would be something like Frostine Blane c: Now Due to the fact she's not really all that modern I was thinking maybe she would be back in a period of where some witch craft is formed I guess? Thus the whole souls thing lol I'm not sure I might think of more later
Anyways I hope you enjoy c:
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My darling;D I dropped by and saw you wanted a critique c;
Alright, so at first from a glance I thought the background was part of her hair o u o heh I'm blind ;~;
So alright, first thing I look at is the flower since it's at the top. It looks sorta odd, and I don't know if you were trying to do a 3D look, but I'm not sure so I won't say much about it ;w;
Her hair is alright, I like the curly part of it the most. The shading on it is somewhat messy, as in the lines should be smoother and maybe blured/watercolored a tiny bit, not to destroy the shapes of the shading but just so the shading doesn't look messy.
The shading on her face/skin is rather odd. For one, you shaded with a black airbrush I believe, which doesn't really look good. It's better to use skin colors (Here's my personal pallet :D [link] ) to shade, because it shows up better :3 and also, the eyes and mouth are being shaded in weird way :$ I don't think they should be shaded at all. If the mouth has to be shaded, shade the under part.
I like her dress, although those effects on the blue just look like they don't belong ;-; but I do like the color combos ;D
The shoes are sorta just eh. They don't really have a foot shape, and are extremely small. I know it's cartoonish, but I would think they would be a bit bigger ;w;
okey my darling there you go ;D
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i like the way you highlighted her hair, but the spikes on the ponytail don't really belong, cos her hair is bushy and curly, but spikes go more for straight hair.

OK I LOVE HOW YOU ADDED PLUMPNESS AND SHAPE TO THE LEGS, IT'S ADORABLE, but with the arms, try to just measure with your fingers how long each arm is, so they're the same length.
right now, if you unbent her right arm, it would be a little longer than the other. and just because the view of the girl, (she's not facing us, she's facing someone to the right of us) if anything that arm should be shorter than the other. also, keep in mind that you should round out the fingers, so they're not as spiky. now if you're going to have her have 3 fingers and a thumb, make the thumb more prominent, becas right now it just looks like she has four webbed fingers.
the other arm however, should be that straight, becas no one has their arm as straight as a board when waving to someone.
try to bend it a little, so it looks more natural.
other thank that,
I THINK IT'S SUPER ADORABLE <33
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FrostedSouls Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
this is so cute~!! i like that you put a twist to her design and went out of the boundaries~~ love her dress and the colors as well
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
<33 Well I hope I didn't get too much out of the boundaries xD Thank you I'm glad you like it ^^
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AskLeafPrincess Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee: OH GOSH!!! YOU HAVE TO WIN!!!))
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lol you think so? ^^ I like one of the entry's better then mine ahaha
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AskLeafPrincess Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really?! Naw! Lupe's? It's good, yeah, but not as good as yours!))
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
D'awwwwwww~~ Don't say that I'll blush cx (And yes I really like Lupes entry <3)
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AskLeafPrincess Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But it's true!! (Yeah it's GOOD, but I still like yours better!) ))
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well thank you so much cx I do hope I win at least 2nd place haha (asdfghjkl and Don't say that <333)
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AskLeafPrincess Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I bet 1st! (Better better better!! YOURS S BETTER!!! <3))
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Syico Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
SDFGHJK~~ (don't say this in public too much xD it might discourage others) But thank you so much for your kind words <3333
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